In CMC class we are testing a method to evaluate which have lot of benefits to us, the students, but on the other hand it also has some disadvantages. In this method a student exposes her/him blog. When the student has completed the presentation, the others have to form groups of four and we have to evaluate how have they done it , and how much they know about the subject that they talked and at the end we have to ask some questions .
The good thing about this method is that we can know the opinion of all our partner and also we can know our mistakes. It is also good because we lose the shame when we talk in front of a lot of people. But with this method of evaluation, students can evaluate our partners depending of our relationship with them.
From my point of view, I think this can be very beneficial for us.
Hello Laura! Sorry but I am going to tell you some mistakes in your grammar! I hope I'm not wrong!
ResponderEliminarWell, I think that if you use " On the other hand" you have to put first "On one hand" because I have learned that this expression is attached!
Well, I think that you have a very good grammar because I can't find more mistakes!!!
XOXO
Ana
Hi Laura!! I'm going to say you the same that Ana has just tell you!
ResponderEliminarI think that it will be better for the aesthetic of your blog to put a photo!
Congratulations for your English!
xxoxo
Hello Laura!
ResponderEliminarAs Ana has said in her comment I think that you only have this mistake, and I think that is "depending on our relationship", but isn't very important because you have a very good grammar.
I think like you about this method of evaluation, but I think, too, that if the estudents evaluate depending on their relationship, the teacher could correct this.
Another thing that I can tell you to improve your post is that you can put a photo accompaying the text.
Good job!
kisses!
Hi Laura!
ResponderEliminarSorry but I have to tell you some mistakes that I've found. First, You've written 'a method to evaluate which have...' and I think it is 'has' because it is replaced by the pronoun 'it'.
Then, I'm not sure but If I were you I would write: when the student 'completes' or 'finishs'.I think It's better.
In conclusion, don't worry because that mistakes aren't important and your opinion about this subject is interesting.
Well done!
Marina.